keeping your readers’ attention – why less is more

6 Jan
2010

This year’s focus is simple green changes. Ones that are easy to implement and drastically reduce our carbon footprint. Consumption includes information and time too – less is more.

Today, I am pleased to announce my first guest post from Vlad Dolezal of Fun Life Development to shed some light on why (and how) less is more.

Last summer, I was at a meet-up of esperanto speakers. One evening, a folk singer decided to throw a concert for us. So he played his guitar, and sang, and gave us little bits to sing along to, and everybody had a great time!

After about 10 songs, he finished, and we all clapped and cheered, asking for an encore. We really loved the concert, so we thought we’d have one more song as the encore, and then be off with a great feeling about the concert.

Anyway, he played a song as his encore. And then he played a second one. Then he played a third one, and by this point I started wondering when he was going to be done – I kind of wanted to get out of there. I saw other people in the audience shifting uncomfortably, so I know I wasn’t the only one.

By the fourth encore song, people started leaving. When he finished the fifth encore song and went into the sixth one, I just got up and left. Over half the audience had gone by this point.

Very quickly, we went from having a great time to wondering when the hell he will be done. He simply dragged on just a bit too long, and lost the audience.

And the same applies to your blogging!

You might think that throwing in another statistic, and one more anecdote, and a few more quotes will only make your point more persuasive. But if you lose your audience’s attention, you lose your argument.

Instead, state your point, offer one or two bits of evidence, and then get the hell out, before your audience can start wondering when you will be done.

Like this.

Vlad Dolezal of Fun Life Development has a way of making complicated things simple. His ideas are meant to be fun with fresh anecdotes to drive them home -  passion and purpose is evident. My world improves with Vlad on the sidelines. Check out his blog for more great ideas for improving your life!

11 Responses to keeping your readers’ attention – why less is more

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January 6th, 2010 at 10:30 am

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Tess Bold Life

January 6th, 2010 at 12:21 pm

I think there’s a lot of truth in this. I think the guru’s get away with it because…well…they just do. Great advice!

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Clyde Machine

January 6th, 2010 at 1:39 pm

Love how the article ended. =D A very insightful post, I’ll keep this in mind, since I seem to have some infatuation with typing a LOT when it comes to blogs and journals.

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January 6th, 2010 at 10:01 pm

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Davina

January 6th, 2010 at 10:53 pm

I’m surprised that he went on with such a long encore. I’ve never been to a concert where that happened before. He obviously enjoys what he’s doing, but you’d think he would have picked up on the signals from the audience. It’s not as clear with blogging as you don’t see the audience.

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January 8th, 2010 at 6:04 am

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simply stephen

January 8th, 2010 at 3:47 pm

@Tess ah, I think ego comes to mind! Guru’s are often self-proclaimed.

@Clyde you are not alone. We all seem to type to much…think if we spent more time on the editing part and became vigilant with it we could all improve our messaging. Maybe turning one post into two by separating each idea is a trick to practice. Good luck with your changes.

@Davina I’ve actually been at a few concerts where the encore never happened (U2, The Edge had fallen off the stage in Washington and was injured) and some where it didn’t go on long enough like ACDC at Pink Floyd where I could sit and listen to two endless encores. However, he should have picked the signals up from the audience. Blogging it is tougher – usually checking your RSS feed unsubscribes, limited comments and retweets can help gauge your audience but you still have to connect the dots – maybe it was the type of article, the content, the timing, the topic or so many other things.

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Vlad Dolezal

January 8th, 2010 at 5:16 pm

@Clyde:

Twitter is great for practicing this. I often type a 180-character tweet… but since I can’t cross 140, I have to eliminate everything unnecessary. This usually makes the message clearer, too!

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simply stephen

January 10th, 2010 at 10:48 am

Twitter sure is the ultimate brevity machine. Good practice for succinct writing.

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Sheila Crosby

January 30th, 2010 at 5:05 am

Traditional advice to anyone giving a speech: stand up, speak up, and shut up.

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